She laid on the couch in lacy lingerie.
Her unclothed legs were intertwined,
belly button bare, bosom heaved gently.
Her eyes gazed at the empty infinity above her nose.
The cascade of hair cloaked her naked shoulders.
She trailed her fingers through her body-
slowly, softly, ever aware of her being.
That she is everything she can think of.
She is life and annihilation, both at the same time.
The breathing universe flows like blood through her veins.
But when her body is against yours,
do not be deceived to think that you can contain her,
for who could dare contain the universe?
(First published one year ago.)
well-written….and illustrated!!!! 🙂
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Why thank you, sir.
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You’re welcome, ma’am! 🙂
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Wow, this is beautiful 😵💓
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Did your jaw really drop?
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Yes! You have a way with words and I’m so delighted I got to know you and that you noticed one of my writings. Amazing!
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‘She trailed her fingers through her body-
slowly, softly, ever aware of her being.
That she is everything she can think of. ‘
My favourite lines – I must have read those three lines about ten times – the whole poem is beautiful!
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Just like you!
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Love this!!
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I wonder… Is it David Copperfield?
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Nope, it’s just DC. 😉
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You’re being tricky!
Not an abbreviation, is it?
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The name initials meaning morphed over the years. When i 1st started writing I wrote under the name dark cloud. As i was really depressed at the time & struggling to find meaning in life. Also to many who saw it assumed something negative about it. Then I met someone who renamed me to da coolest. But i use DC primarily verse explaining it. But now people will know if they read this comment. 🙂
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Most interesting!
Will you file a case against me if I called you David?
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No, a rose by any other name is still a rose. I’m not hung up on names or titles.
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Call thyself a rose?
Ah! Most wonderful!
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It’s an expression I heard decades ago. Someone who truly loves & treasures U could call you anything & it would sound like angels singing in your ears.
However someone who doesn’t share those feeling could say your name & it’ll sound like nails on a chalkboard. lol
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You expressed it so beautifully!
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Wow! I absolutely love the emotion in this! The vision of the woman looking so sexy, available, but a warning to one who would think to posess her, for it is an impossibility. Brilliant. It is also sexy and alluring. You made it so I wanted to be the one she was looking upon. Of course, it helps that I have a thing for lingerie, lol
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No prudent man would think otherwise, especially if the owner of the lingerie is an exquisite woman…
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I am sure!
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I didn’t know if to leave a comment or not, but now I have decided to do so.
WOW, that is sexy, the writing I mean, and you also. Just so you don’t get depressed.
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Glad mother doesn’t read this blog. She would have had a word or two with you otherwise.
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She does read it, and and she has seen me do worst things, wich since you are a lady I won’ t say…. although they are plated in some of the posts, military thing, thug thing, e.t.c.. She’ s no dummy.
By the way why are we talking about my mother, she loves her kid, I love her and not more to it.
The question still stands, are you having dinner with me?
I will have some vegetarian food even though I might commit sucide latter on, but just for you I will do it.
What part from India are you from?
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Beautiful writing..
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Beautiful ❤ Love your style and sense of writing! i relate more than i can tell, so much so that it pushed me to resume writing again! SO much love
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Your words bring me much happiness.
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Ah, as yours brought me, I am glad!
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Stellar. I really liked it. Keep it up!
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Really wonderful poetry, looking forward to following you and reading more.
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Very well composed
Sour rememberance of better days *sigh*
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Unbelievable. 🙂
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What is it that you can’t believe?
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Outstanding
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